The Brain Drain by Atilola Moronfolu



Hi People,

This is one of my performances at the February edition of Word Up. I think there's something wrong with it, but watch and tell me what you think.

23 comments

  1. Loool! This is the first time i'm listening to your spoken words. got me laughing!! Lovelly.

    Something wrong? Only our mentality!

    :D

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  2. i like the message behind it..but it came across as too forced , for me. If i wasnt an ardent reader of ur blog would not watch it till the end

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    1. Na wa o. Where is the constructive criticism?

      I know what is wrong with the performance, and it has nothing to do with being forced. Thanks for the comment.

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    2. lool@ forced.. i think the person meant rushed...

      I thought it was rushed but I got why, the idea is to keep people on their toes. Having said that I liked the message behind it.

      I think you naturally talk fast and for some people that are not used to our Niaja accent and the tone,they might struggle to understand and assimilate the information.

      All the same,you will get better with time. So Kudos hun.x

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  3. You've got my mind going 'flip...flip..flip.

    Couldn't pick up a single thing wrong with this.

    Weldone.

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  4. Clapping, quite nice...I kept watching the movement of your fingers sha....don't think that would have been the case if I was in the audience...and i felt it was kinda rushed, that doesnt take away from the message oh......kai...see me criticising like i could have done half of that....thumbs up dear...you are good

    Ps: I am so "jealouxing" your hair right now

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    1. Lol. Now that you mention it, when you start performing on a stage like 'word up', then we can talk. For now, I am giving you the back hand.

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  5. LMAOOOO!!!! I agree, it sounded a bit rushed....but it is just hard for me to reconcile the video with @ilola the blogsville trouble maker...LMAOOOO.....
    with your gesticulations and all, you should do a rap collabo with maybe eminem or Jay Z.....so expressive.
    You go Girl!!!!

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    1. ahn ahn, I am not a trouble maker o, kai. Lol. Thanks jare.

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  6. Aww the hair! I love it
    Just get to the tutorial already :)

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  7. Blessings....
    I enjoyed it, lots of food for thought, things to make you go hmmmmmmmmm...and flip flip flip.

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  8. This is nice! I really enjoyed watching it.
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